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No Trespassing

by

Eleanor Dixon

She couldn't resist exploring the deserted house. The old man grabbed her and locked her in.
Police, family, local services - all looking for her.   Marcie found her.
The man was defiant. 'I only wanted her to catch the mice,' he mumbled, as she snuggled into Marcie's safe embrace and purred.

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Comments Received

Really clever idea. What a twist in the tale (or should that be tail?).
Wilson Irving



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