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Lucinda was looking for a suitable prince as a husband. "These are my sons," said the King. "Archibald, Bertram, Cuthbert, Damien and Edgar." "Aren't they sweet," said Lucinda, "but they're rather young." She gave them each a kiss, whereupon they all turned into tadpoles. Except Edgar. But that's another story.

I liked The Queen's Secret. Unfortunately, it left me waiting for the next installment; what happened to Edgar? If the reader is left wanting more of your work, then you must be doing something right.
Janis Robertson

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