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One Small Step...

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Janis M Robertson

Anna edged towards the open door. Freedom lay beyond it, if only she dared grasp to it. She had dreamed of this moment for years, but now she was afraid.
For the first time, she'd be truly on her own. One more step.
'Wow!' Anna squealed as her parachute opened.

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I thoroughly enjoyed this. The clever way the tension is built up is brilliant.
Wilson Irving


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