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The following poem has been submitted by Janis M. Robertson who says: 'It has been a while since I contributed to the group, but this piece of froth was triggered by your workshop theme. I hope it is enjoyed in the light-hearted spirit in which it was written!'

What's in a Name?

Pollock – Hastan,
Gilfillan – Dove,
Maxwell – Jackson,
Ferrier – Duff…
Swanson – Packwood,
Ogilvie – Paw,
Davidson – Wood,
Parise – Whytlaw…
Ramsay – Blackie,
Somerville – Craig,
Bertram – Hardie,
Gledstanes – Blake…
Mitchel – Thorntowne,
Henderson – Whyte,
Morrison – Browne,
Rankine – MacKnight…
Just a list of names
(From a family tree),
All links in the chain
That leads to – me!

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